Persuasive Writing

In Writing we have been learning about how to write persuasive writing. We created a first draft then edited it by looking to see if our arguments made a point. Next we fixed up our introduction and conclusion. This was very fun and I learnt a lot. My topic is "Why we should all live a healthier life". 

Why We All Should Make An Effort To Live A Healthier Life

I bet you enjoy sitting on the couch with a massive ice cream sundae on your lap watching tv. What you should be doing is going a speedy walk to pick up a salad. We can all agree that we should start to live a healthier life, but why??? Keep on reading to find out!

Firstly, laying around all day eating mcdonalds in a dark closed in space will make you tired, lazy and possibly even sick because of the lack of exercise, fresh air, light and healthy food. As an alternative scenario you could choose a healthy fast food meal such as a subway salad or Pita Pit. Then do something outside before watching tv in a light open area.

Part of being healthy is about being happy and social. If you aren’t then you might become grumpy and moody. Every once in awhile when you find time its a good idea catch up with your friends at an organic cafe. Say no to fried eggs and say yes to scrambled ones. Say no french fries and say yes to wedges. You will leave feeling social, healthy and hopefully happy. Having a girls day out can never hurt either!

Lastly we all want to live for ages! Living an unhealthy life may be enjoyable at the time but later you will regret it. You may fall sick and live for shorter than you may have if you had lead a healthier life earlier. Getting a head start is key if you want to live for longer. So let's be healthy and live for longer!!!!

Now that we all know some reasons why we should live a healthier life why would we hesitate to begin our journey to live one!!! Even if you only make a couple of small tweaks to your life I bet you will see a difference someday. From this second on let's all be healthier!!!!!!!